proto-Jakarta in Hoi-Ka, first draft
Planet hoi- kah The hoi- kah where a bipedal feline species. Their red tented planet circled a blue sun. I wanted to do a lot of looking into that, there weren’t many livable planets around a blue star, but after using the laptop on and off over the last week I was wanting to find out what was causing the hate. I landed VERITAS on manual at the ship-dock in the biggest city Hoi- rew . “What does Hoi mean?” “Place.” The landing area was busy, and noisy. It was a very large building made out of a grey metal. Light was coming from an unseen source somewhere overhead. People of several different humanoid species where busy doing their jobs. At the black, star destroyer like ship next to my parking spot; a red elf like lady was instructing 2 silver tabby gentlemen on where to send a metal crate holding some black looking… fru it maybe that I thought looked unappetizing. Most of the people here ...